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Post by Waffle Monger on Mar 18, 2006 21:47:52 GMT -5
---review is down for maintence---
---will be back up on 3/19/2006---
~ The mismanagement
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Post by Richard-RN on Mar 18, 2006 22:33:40 GMT -5
Point system is always good. Thats also a very short review, and rather informal as well. When reviewing something, you should operate under the assumption that the reader has never played the game before, so try to be as detailed as possible when outlining gameplay, graphics, etc. Mario games have never had a great story, and you should probably include that as a side not instead of a whole section. Its always nice to have an intro and conclusion to make things nicer, and when you write reviews you should let the reader know if you enjoyed it and if you think they would enjoy it. To me your review was kind of like -- here is the game -- you might like it. I think its cool you want to improve your writing, the best way is to write whenever you can.
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Post by Waffle Monger on Mar 18, 2006 23:00:03 GMT -5
Thank you. I will redo the review. I will tear this delete this review, and post it back here tomorrow in it's place.
I was going to do the point system as well, but I couldn't think of anything except for Gameplay, Sound, Graphics, & Value(replayability and amount of content)
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Post by Waffle Monger on Mar 19, 2006 20:47:04 GMT -5
Sorry I couldn't do it today. I was sick in bed and preoccupied with Resident Evil 4(yes, I have finally purchased my own copy today) and Tales of Phantasia.
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King Thwomp
Pikmin
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Post by King Thwomp on Apr 25, 2006 23:56:58 GMT -5
As a general review, I would have to say that super mario world for snes is one of the greatest games ever, except, of course, super mario all stars:) But smw is really cool because its the first game that introduces yoshi (the best) into the story. The next best game after all stars though would have to be yoshis island:)  . But all in all, smw is an extremly fun game, and has great replayability. Its game play is also exellent if your like me and like the mario side scrollers. |
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Armos
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Post by Agent Smith on Apr 30, 2006 13:07:36 GMT -5
It's too bad i sold all of my snes console and games. I had SMW and i loved it.
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Post by Waffle Monger on Apr 30, 2006 17:22:20 GMT -5
It's too bad i sold all of my snes console and games. I had SMW and i loved it. I have my SNES system and Super Mario World still. ^_^ No matter what, I AM NOT SELLING MY SNES AND THE GAMES |
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Post by Pilgrim John on May 1, 2006 12:13:22 GMT -5
Not that I would force you to sell it. Hey, that might be the cure to your gameless attitude! Pop in a Super Nintendo game and see if anything happens. |
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Agent Smith
Armos
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Post by Agent Smith on May 30, 2006 13:13:11 GMT -5
i remember lots of good times playing that game......
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Post by Panique on Sept 11, 2006 23:56:11 GMT -5
Hah, I win! I still have a NES! And games!... well, it's my Dad's, but I still play it. Yes!
Aww, the review's down. I'll have to revisit when it comes back.
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Post by Pilgrim John on Sept 12, 2006 9:20:10 GMT -5
Hah, I win! I still have a NES! And games!... well, it's my Dad's, but I still play it. Yes! Aww, the review's down. I'll have to revisit when it comes back. SO DO I! Actually, I had to rebuy it, BUT THAT'S BESIDE THE POINT!! |
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Post by Waffle Monger on Sept 12, 2006 20:44:51 GMT -5
Lol, I did this review when I first joine din March. I took it down and never put it back up did I... hmmm... I might get back to it. It's number 123456789 on the things i need to do first.
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