Sonic Screw-Ups!

[benwayshouse]

I got bored, so I whipped up a sprite comic. Enjoy!





;D Your thoughts?

EDIT: Since the strip was scaled down, I'll say the script.

Panel One:
Knuckles [Red Text] Arrgh! Why won't they let us in?

Sonic [Blue Text] For God's sake, we're freaking national phenomenons!

Tails [Orange Text] Yeah, we're hungry, so why don't you let us in?

PANEL TWO, to the right of Panel One:

Amy [Pink Text] Sounds like you could use some help, Sonic!

Sonic: Amy, wtf are you doing here?

Rouge [Gray text] We are hungry so we came for a Big Mac. Care to join us?

Sonic: We can't get in, why, we dunno.

PANEL THREE, below Panel One:

Amy: Well duh, it's cause your naked! Why do you think I chase you all the time? Anyway, see the sign? It says: 'No shirt, No shoes, No service'. You ain't got a shirt! So's ya can't get in!

Sonic: Really?

Amy: You bet!

Cream[Brown Text] Hey, a robot's coming!

Amy: Well, us gals gotta skedaddle. See ya, boys!

PANEL FOUR, next to Panel Three

Gamma [Black Text] Must... Exterminate... nudists...

Sonic/Tails/Knuckles altogether: We are screwed.

END ;D Is it funny? I hope you think so.

[Jason-RN]

Heh. Pretty cool comic, Symph.

[benwayshouse]

Jason-RN said:

Heh. Pretty cool comic, Symph.

Thanks, if you notice, the McDonald's billboard says "All your base are belong to us."

[Jason-RN]

Symphonic said:

Thanks, if you notice, the McDonald's billboard says "All your base are belong to us."

Heh. I actually didn't notice that...

[Leverish]

lol. You have potential.

[benwayshouse]

Nintendo said:

lol. You have potential.

I'm thinking of the next Screw-Up. It involves Amy, Shadow and... something just as odd as Amy's reasons for.... chasing Sonic.

[GreenCloud8]

lol, nice comic!

[Kirbster4]

I agree with GreenCloud8. YOUR COMIC IS GREAT!

[Leverish]

Just a suggestion. Make like a couple of comics instead of just one, so you have something to post if you don't have the funny coming to you.

I learned many thing at sonicanime.net about Fan Comics. Too bad the managment went really bad and a huge bunch of n00bs came in. I really miss that place....

[Jehuty]

That was pretty good, I might suggest sizing it up a bit before you put the text in though, but good thinking on putting transcripts.

[mylescloutier]

Ha ha. That is pretty cool. I love Tails so much. Because we have the same name!

His name is Miles (Tails) Prower
And my name is Myles Steven Cloutier
I should change my name to Myles Tails Cloutier.

Yah I know...I'm crazy.



PS-My last name is pronounced Clue-Chay.

[Kirbster4]

mylescloutier said:

Ha ha. That is pretty cool. I love Tails so much. Because we have the same name!

His name is Miles (Tails) Prower
And my name is Myles Steven Cloutier
I should change my name to Myles Tails Cloutier.

Yah I know...I'm crazy.



PS-My last name is pronounced Clue-Chay.

Wow I pronounced your name out loud and it seemed kinda cool. I thought it was Clou-tier. Wow that's cool.

Maybe you should? I like Sonic cause he's fast and the leader. ;D

[starfoxrules]

I personally like Sonic!

Nice though Symphonic!