Post by Kirbster4 on Mar 26, 2005 22:30:52 GMT -5
See how this story is.
THE 2 SHADOWS
The captain swung his lantern 3 times and all of a sudden a schooner appeared. A schooner is a medium size boat. A boy was holding his hand and the boy stood still as the captain did. The schooner... started getting closer and now they could see a figure standing on the boat like a monster.
This was a damp pitch black night and there was just the boy and captain. THEN out in the woods they heard a sound like a monster you may see on a horror movie. But it sounded like it was coming closer. But then it... stopped. DEAD stopped. But all in a flash the boy was gone from the captain's hand and now there were 2 figures on the boat and the captain could see it was a woman but still darkend. Then a small figure next to her. But now the captain could see the lady had a knife. No not a knife... a katana. A katana is a sword a ninja may use. And now he could see the boy... with an empty sack and but he noticed since the schooner was so close he could see blood on the katana. The hair on his back went up as like you may get goosebumps. The boat was now about only 50 inches away.
But the captain did not move and now the schooner had reached the tiny dock in which the captain was on the wet grass motionless. They both stepped out and started walking towards him... slowly. The captain looked as he was paralized.
But now the captain was going to yell put it was too late. He dropped on the ground and the boy slipped him in the sack and tied it then gave it to the woman and the woman nodded her head. They got back on ship... the sack with the murdered captain and the two shadows.
But then the next night someone was venturing through the park and a schooner apeared.
The END
Comments anyone?
THE 2 SHADOWS
The captain swung his lantern 3 times and all of a sudden a schooner appeared. A schooner is a medium size boat. A boy was holding his hand and the boy stood still as the captain did. The schooner... started getting closer and now they could see a figure standing on the boat like a monster.
This was a damp pitch black night and there was just the boy and captain. THEN out in the woods they heard a sound like a monster you may see on a horror movie. But it sounded like it was coming closer. But then it... stopped. DEAD stopped. But all in a flash the boy was gone from the captain's hand and now there were 2 figures on the boat and the captain could see it was a woman but still darkend. Then a small figure next to her. But now the captain could see the lady had a knife. No not a knife... a katana. A katana is a sword a ninja may use. And now he could see the boy... with an empty sack and but he noticed since the schooner was so close he could see blood on the katana. The hair on his back went up as like you may get goosebumps. The boat was now about only 50 inches away.
But the captain did not move and now the schooner had reached the tiny dock in which the captain was on the wet grass motionless. They both stepped out and started walking towards him... slowly. The captain looked as he was paralized.
But now the captain was going to yell put it was too late. He dropped on the ground and the boy slipped him in the sack and tied it then gave it to the woman and the woman nodded her head. They got back on ship... the sack with the murdered captain and the two shadows.
But then the next night someone was venturing through the park and a schooner apeared.
The END
Comments anyone?
